Help/consulting on acadamic project

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Hi,
As this is my first post on this forum i’d like to introduce myself first.
I am a Mechanical Engeneering Student about to finish my study cicle, i’m 22 years old and trying to have a carrer in automation.

I have a project regarding the position control of a given load using a servo motor and before deliverying it i’d like to ask for your opinions about how good it is done. First of all i would like to have your thoughts on how well the diagram is built and if it is right to use it like this.
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Thank you in advance for your time.

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May want to move this to off-topic.

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I’m new here and don’t really know how to. Any hints please?

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You know that this forum is about a game called automation rather than automating mechanical processes, right?

Also, if you are graduating, I reckon you should be able to tell whether or not the diagrams are good. I’m an engineer student myself, and I would say that the first diagram is rather badly organised and I have no knowledge on automation so far to be able to say anything about the second one.

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xDDD my bad
the 1st one is not a diagram its from the problem itself.

Ty anyways